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    Default Stroll in the park

    This is a snapshot, after some PP.



    C & C on composition and framing of picture most welcome

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    No comments?

    What do you feel about the border of the picture. I had a hard time deciding which type of border to use (black/white/feather/shadow...) Or would a borderless picture be better?

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    i dunno about you but 2 aunties strolling. does it deserve a frame even?
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    Default Re: Stroll in the park

    Quote Originally Posted by babykailan View Post
    i dunno about you but 2 aunties strolling. does it deserve a frame even?
    think this is the best comment ever...

    even the horizon is tilted, see the table...
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    Default Re: Stroll in the park

    Quote Originally Posted by ahsosl1e8 View Post
    This is a snapshot, after some PP.



    C & C on composition and framing of picture most welcome
    1. like how others pointed out, this framing of this scene looks too commonplace. that also make the soft lighting processing excessive.

    2. the word 'Stroll' on the picture is kind of redundant, neither does it add anything to the picture, nor does it look anything interesting on its own.

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    you should have exposed for the ladies or the sky. it seems undecided (what you're going for). horizon looks fine to me-the table is friggin crooked..

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    as a looker...can't seem to identify the subject of interest...

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