Burned Out

jeremyterabyte · 23rd November 2006

First time posting, C&C Welcomed.

jeremyterabyte · 24th November 2006

Not worthy of any comments..... ?

dejected · 24th November 2006

perhaps a brief intro on your photograph would do good... simply looking at it, it just doesn't tell anything...

Youhong · 24th November 2006

Generally, the joss sticks were all burnt out... (layman term meaning burnt finished liao lah)

1) The subject/focus is neither at the center nor at the one-third... Not too sure...
2) A little underexposed
3) While the "you deng" (not sure english called what) add more meaning to the picture, but in this pic seems to "steal" attention away...
4) I would like the background to be more bokeh
5) If you can capture the moments of the joss sticks burnt out, but still glowing, that will be even better!
6) you may want to do more closed up shot of the joss sticks?
7) Show one burnt out VS a newly lighted one to show a strong contrast?

Cheers! Jia you jia you...

23rd November 2006	#1
jeremyterabyte New Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 36	Burned Out First time posting, C&C Welcomed.

24th November 2006	#2
jeremyterabyte New Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 36	Re: Burned Out Not worthy of any comments..... ?

24th November 2006	#3
dejected Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: east! Posts: 736	Re: Burned Out perhaps a brief intro on your photograph would do good... simply looking at it, it just doesn't tell anything... __________________ Leica helps me calm down when i shoot.

24th November 2006	#4
Youhong Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: North Posts: 3,908	Re: Burned Out Generally, the joss sticks were all burnt out... (layman term meaning burnt finished liao lah) 1) The subject/focus is neither at the center nor at the one-third... Not too sure... 2) A little underexposed 3) While the "you deng" (not sure english called what) add more meaning to the picture, but in this pic seems to "steal" attention away... 4) I would like the background to be more bokeh 5) If you can capture the moments of the joss sticks burnt out, but still glowing, that will be even better! 6) you may want to do more closed up shot of the joss sticks? 7) Show one burnt out VS a newly lighted one to show a strong contrast? Cheers! Jia you jia you... __________________ I am NOT a PROfessional photographer and photography is NOT my hobby