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Old 23rd November 2006   #1
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juz tot of it when the window was open...

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Old 23rd November 2006   #2
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cool angle.
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Old 23rd November 2006   #3
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juz tot of it when the window was open...

doesn't work for me, just another snap shot that u can take everyday...

besides that, compostion does not work as well... cos when you have such shot, there have to be a repeat pattern, yours does not, esp with some racks above. Look the plain sky, no contrast...
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Old 23rd November 2006   #4
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anyway something to share what i took about nearly 2 years ago, (2-3or4 months) when i just started using a DSLR from a consumer camera... can't find my other look up pic, maybe in another hdd somewhere... best i got in this hdd... not the perfect pic, but enuff to illustrate... there is some minor distortion.

yours is not uniformed, so look more like a snapshot. there is bits & pieces of nit piks to pinpoint.
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Old 23rd November 2006   #5
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nice. if it was a pure blue sky would be nicer
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Old 23rd November 2006   #6
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nice. if it was a pure blue sky would be nicer
(can PS) hehe... but point i trying to put across is the uniformity...

anyway this is from my dustbin thou... (others dun need critic on mine hor)
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Old 23rd November 2006   #7
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haha i see this view errrr...
abit headache... extreme angle!!
u must hav strained ur neck to get tt shot straight.
or did u juz use PS?haha
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haha i see this view errrr...
abit headache... extreme angle!!
u must hav strained ur neck to get tt shot straight.
or did u juz use PS?haha
hehe... i shot this almost lying down liao... did not have a angle finder that time... if have angle finder would be easier...
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i think you take that shot with a symmetry perspective would be nicer. like how Del_CtrlnoAlt did. but every HDB blocks has its own design, so they might sound the same and look totally different.
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Old 24th November 2006   #10
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sound the same but look different?
u mean different patterns of symmetry?
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Old 27th November 2006   #11
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yeah something like that. make it unique.
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