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    Default Freedom - leaf in the stream



    Hi guys, new to photography here.. but am interested in it.. currently this is one of my work, hope to receive some feedback/comment from it. thanks.

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    Default Re: Freedom - leaf in the stream

    a little more space aroud it will speak of more "freedom" if you know what i mean?
    the part i like...looks sharp, nice

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    Default Re: Freedom - leaf in the stream

    the shimmery reflections do not work for me. it takes away the focus on the leaf and creates a lot of distraction. i find my eyes wandering around the photo.

    maybe you can use a polarizer and limit the amount of reflections.
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    Default Re: Freedom - leaf in the stream

    maybe include more of the "stream" elements in the picture, like rocks and pebbles.. cos I just see a picture of a leaf in water.. also agree on the shimmering reflections, too distracting..

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    Default Re: Freedom - leaf in the stream

    A polariser would help a lot here. The reflections are too distracting.

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