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Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 21
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Hi C+C on how to improve product shots please. Thanks.
Shot with Nikon D50, 18-70mm @ 35mm f8. ![]() |
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Clementi, Singapore
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Looks quite dull and uninteresting, plus, its slanted.
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Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Punggol
Posts: 10,799
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it will be good if you could...
use the longest focal length to shoot use white board to block off all the ugly reflection on the bottle |
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Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 1,002
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the bottle looks... funny...
perspective... the neck looks swollen and the bottle looks small pour more Baileys into the cup? crop a bit "i dont know how to put it" and the shadows, i assume you meant for light to come from the left... |
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 414
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yeah... quite bore.. may be you can try difference lighting set up...
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New Member
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 21
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Thanks for the feedback.
Could you please tell me what do you mean by slanted? Looks straight to me. Hmm. I agree with the ugly reflections from the bottle. Will try to improve next time ![]() About the baileys, those were the last few drops from the bottle. Only if I had not consumed it beforehand. Hehe. Does the bottle really look funny? I couldn't really tell. Oh well. Thanks again. |
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Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: North
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THe use of the longest focal is prefered because using wide angle will most likely cause it to have distortion...
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Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Punggol
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he is using 35mm focal length of the 18~70 lens to shoot this, so have the perspective distortion,
usually, we will use a mid tele for product shot. |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Punggol
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35mm focal length on a D50 are not consider wide angle, but still will have distortion.
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