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Old 20th November 2006   #1
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Default Baileys anyone?

Hi C+C on how to improve product shots please. Thanks.

Shot with Nikon D50, 18-70mm @ 35mm f8.

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Old 20th November 2006   #2
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Default Re: Baileys anyone?

Looks quite dull and uninteresting, plus, its slanted.
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Old 20th November 2006   #3
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Default Re: Baileys anyone?

it will be good if you could...
use the longest focal length to shoot
use white board to block off all the ugly reflection on the bottle


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Old 20th November 2006   #4
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Default Re: Baileys anyone?

the bottle looks... funny...
perspective... the neck looks swollen and the bottle looks small
pour more Baileys into the cup?
crop a bit "i dont know how to put it"

and the shadows, i assume you meant for light to come from the left...
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Old 20th November 2006   #5
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yeah... quite bore.. may be you can try difference lighting set up...
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Old 20th November 2006   #6
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Default Re: Baileys anyone?

Originally Posted by catchlights View Post
it will be good if you could...
use the longest focal length to shoot
use white board to block off all the ugly reflection on the bottle

good advice but may i ask why use the logest focal length to shoot?
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Old 20th November 2006   #7
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Default Re: Baileys anyone?

Thanks for the feedback.

Could you please tell me what do you mean by slanted? Looks straight to me. Hmm.

I agree with the ugly reflections from the bottle. Will try to improve next time

About the baileys, those were the last few drops from the bottle. Only if I had not consumed it beforehand. Hehe.

Does the bottle really look funny? I couldn't really tell. Oh well.

Thanks again.
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Old 20th November 2006   #8
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Default Re: Baileys anyone?

Originally Posted by Zaknafein View Post
good advice but may i ask why use the logest focal length to shoot?
THe use of the longest focal is prefered because using wide angle will most likely cause it to have distortion...
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Default Re: Baileys anyone?

he is using 35mm focal length of the 18~70 lens to shoot this, so have the perspective distortion,
usually, we will use a mid tele for product shot.
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Originally Posted by Youhong View Post
THe use of the longest focal is prefered because using wide angle will most likely cause it to have distortion...
35mm focal length on a D50 are not consider wide angle, but still will have distortion.
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Old 20th November 2006   #11
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Originally Posted by babaman View Post
Thanks for the feedback.

Could you please tell me what do you mean by slanted? Looks straight to me. Hmm.

I agree with the ugly reflections from the bottle. Will try to improve next time

About the baileys, those were the last few drops from the bottle. Only if I had not consumed it beforehand. Hehe.

Does the bottle really look funny? I couldn't really tell. Oh well.

Thanks again.
the vertical line of the bottle, and the vertical line of the tumblers are not parallel, hence looks slanted.
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