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    http://img221.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc1228ut5.jpg

    Please critique
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    Default Re: Flower

    which part of the hibiscus are you trying to focus on?
    what shutter speed and aperture value are you using?
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    i guess it was shot with a digicam of some sort??
    the reds are bleeding quite bad...

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    1) Lack of focus in your subject
    2) Messy Background
    3) Composition off
    4) Over exposed
    5) Over saturated
    6) Possible handshake

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    Quote Originally Posted by yehosaphat View Post
    1) Lack of focus in your subject
    2) Messy Background
    3) Composition off
    4) Over exposed
    5) Over saturated
    6) Possible handshake

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    Default Re: Flower

    anyways,
    apart from the other comments..

    the two big white colour spot at the left end
    are very distracting too.

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    Anyways, dun give up just keep shooting!

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    wow the red is really saturated. abit too much for my liking. try to isolate that hibiscus but choosing a better background, one that is not too cluttered.
    The thingy sticking out from the flower ( isit called the pollen or sth?) also OOF.
    keep shooting mate!

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