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19th November 2006
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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Flower
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Please critique  And...Can someone teach me how to show a picture on forums? |
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20th November 2006
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Re: Flower
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20th November 2006
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Location: Singapore
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Re: Flower
which part of the hibiscus are you trying to focus on?
what shutter speed and aperture value are you using? |
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20th November 2006
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Join Date: Apr 2006
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Re: Flower
i guess it was shot with a digicam of some sort??
the reds are bleeding quite bad... |
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20th November 2006
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Senior Member
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: North
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Re: Flower
1) Lack of focus in your subject
2) Messy Background 3) Composition off 4) Over exposed 5) Over saturated 6) Possible handshake |
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20th November 2006
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21st November 2006
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Join Date: May 2006
Location: Singapore
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Re: Flower
anyways,
apart from the other comments.. the two big white colour spot at the left end are very distracting too. |
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21st November 2006
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Senior Member
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Location: North
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Re: Flower
Anyways, dun give up just keep shooting!
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22nd November 2006
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New Member
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 33
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Re: Flower
wow the red is really saturated. abit too much for my liking. try to isolate that hibiscus but choosing a better background, one that is not too cluttered.
The thingy sticking out from the flower ( isit called the pollen or sth?) also OOF. keep shooting mate! |
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