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18th November 2006
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Singapore / Philippines
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Comments Pls.
hi sirs fire away!
 Last edited by mervingeronimo20; 18th November 2006 at 08:37 PM. |
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18th November 2006
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Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Singapore
Posts: 951
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Re: Comments Pls.
it seems like this photo with the design of the frame and fonts, is worshipping the subject - the construction machine being right smack in the centre of the photo. this is just plain weird.
the subject has almost equal amounts of space around it, which makes it boring. you can try using the basic rule of thirds to increase the compositional value. the play with tones must serve a purpose, which i cannot seem to get a finger on. the "soft", curly fonts seem to clash with the machine being a "hard' subject. other than these, i think it is a bit soft and underexposed. chill ok.  |
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19th November 2006
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 242
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Re: Comments Pls.
erm...the frame captures all my attention away from the photo..
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19th November 2006
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Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Tampines
Posts: 3,315
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Re: Comments Pls.
I find the photo flat. Contrast is flat too.
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