Suspense

Jwenz · 17th November 2006

anything bout to improve this ?

waileong · 18th November 2006

It's pretty darn good, beautiful tonal range, but what's the headline about?

EiRiK · 18th November 2006

the big patch of white bokeh and a smaller white patch above it to the left is slightly distracting

babykailan · 18th November 2006

i dont really feel any suspense here.
on the contrary, the cat looks quite stoned / calm.
the body language does not suit the title.

raptor84 · 18th November 2006

I kinda agree that the small white batch above its head is a little distracting. I think the b/g would have been better with something slighty more even and less contrasty as it is competing for attention. The overall tonal range and contrast are good though. babykailian has a good point about the body language too. The cat does seem a little calm and not very anxious to me.

Jwenz · 20th November 2006

hmm, thanks for commenting and advising ya..
will improve.
thanks.

Soldi · 20th November 2006

Jwenz · 20th November 2006

Originally Posted by Soldi

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waileong Deregistered Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 2,597	Re: Suspense It's pretty darn good, beautiful tonal range, but what's the headline about?

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18th November 2006	#5
raptor84 Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Singapore Posts: 4,282	Re: Suspense I kinda agree that the small white batch above its head is a little distracting. I think the b/g would have been better with something slighty more even and less contrasty as it is competing for attention. The overall tonal range and contrast are good though. babykailian has a good point about the body language too. The cat does seem a little calm and not very anxious to me. __________________ Pet Portrait Portfolio Stock Photos for sale

20th November 2006	#6
Jwenz Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 68	Re: Suspense hmm, thanks for commenting and advising ya.. will improve. thanks.

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