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Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 91
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![]() Though I have been in this forum since August this year (also started photography around that time), I have learnt a lot from the gurus here. I didn't have the guts to post any pics here as it can be quite embarassing if it's not up to standard. But I guess I will not improve much if there are no criticism, hence I am posting my very first photo. This shot of my block was taken just today. A bright sunny day in Punggol. I did some Unsharp Mask and slight cropping to the photo. Details of the shot is as follows: Camera: Canon 20D Lens: Canon 17-40 f4 L Shooting Mode: Aperture-Priority AE TV: 1/25 Av: 13 ISO: 100 Focal Length: 17mm White Balance Mode: Daylight Comments are greatly appreciated. Thanks ![]() PS: Eh...how do I paste the pic directly into this thread? Last edited by eikin; 17th November 2006 at 09:10 PM. Reason: insert image code |
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 168
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The image of the 'dragon' does not seem obvious enough, and has little to do in context with a block of HDB flats.
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Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Under the Sea
Posts: 915
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the building look abit flat on the surface. Maybe can try taking the building at 45 degree angle ?
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Member
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Eastern Singapore
Posts: 1,164
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I can visualise the dragon from the pic straight away...just that the composition with the building dun complement the dragon...but nice capture on the cloud
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Member
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 242
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yup yup can visualise the dragon immediately but the building looks weird, reason being so i dunno why, cos i also newbie
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Member
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 91
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Yah, I know that title does not really fit in for the HDB flat. Actually, I was only taking the flats and did not realise the cloud formation until I viewed the photo on my computer. I thought it would be interesting to have captured the 'Dragon' at that point in time.
Thanks for all your comments. Will do better next time. |
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