ClubSNAP Photography Forums

Go Back   ClubSNAP Photography Forums > Photo Galleries > Critique Corner

Notices

Critique Corner Post your image in here to get serious and honest feedback from fellow photographers. Please read FAQ before posting.


 
Thread Tools
Old 17th November 2006   #1
twistedzero
Member
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 61
Default Merlion Park


What do you think about this picture?
twistedzero is offline  
Old 17th November 2006   #2
photographique
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 960
Default Re: Merlion Park

Good color, and neat...but cliche...haha.
__________________
http://lxrichbirdsf.deviantart.com
Please contact me at 81848022
photographique is offline  
Old 17th November 2006   #3
eikin
Moderator
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: 東京 Tokyo
Posts: 10,920
Default Re: Merlion Park

the subject is rather lost in the mass of blackness. it is placed too close to the right edge of the frame, one is visually trapped on the right side as the rest of the frame carries no interest. the environment is not exposed enough to inform the viewer of the context. consider taking 2 exposures of the same frame, 1 exposed for the Merlion and 1 exposed for the environment, and later combine them in photoshop.
__________________
APAD
eikin is offline  
Sponsored Link
Old 17th November 2006   #4
twistedzero
Member
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 61
Default Re: Merlion Park

@photographique, good point. my wife said the same thing. hehe

@all, thanks.
twistedzero is offline  
Old 17th November 2006   #5
barracuda
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: Singapore
Posts: 618
Default Re: Merlion Park

Nice shot, I like it. Care to share how you did it? esp how did you manage to get the merlion's face so well lit?
barracuda is offline  
Old 17th November 2006   #6
draeger
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 650
Default Re: Merlion Park

I like it too. If you could be kind enough to post the exif? Thanks.
draeger is offline  
Old 19th November 2006   #7
biggulp
Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 168
Default Re: Merlion Park

It's a technically good shot, but as many would say, it's a tired subject.
biggulp is offline  
Old 19th November 2006   #8
twistedzero
Member
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Posts: 61
Default Re: Merlion Park

Shutter : 10
Aperture : 20
ISO : 100

I adjust the white balance using ZoomBrowser to make Merlion white (or whiter).

Thanks!
twistedzero is offline  
Old 19th November 2006   #9
photographique
Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 960
Default Re: Merlion Park

Originally Posted by twistedzero View Post
@photographique, good point. my wife said the same thing. hehe

@all, thanks.
LOL...next can use 'quote'...

Hmm...still a good try.
__________________
http://lxrichbirdsf.deviantart.com
Please contact me at 81848022
photographique is offline  
Old 19th November 2006   #10
brenton
Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 242
Default Re: Merlion Park

hmmmm i was told to go there and practise my techniques le.......

so if i take photos there, it's better not to post them up since everyone is tired of that subject?
brenton is offline  
Closed Thread

Bookmarks

Thread Tools

Forum Jump


All times are GMT +8. The time now is 07:14 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Copyright © 2002 - 2009 ClubSNAP.com
Page generated in 0.07474 seconds with 7 queries