My shots

stormweaver · 14th November 2006

Hi i'll be posting my shots here for C & C. Willing to accept anything u guys comment on. No probs jus shoot me. Thanx i believe thats wad i need.

Jesmun18 · 14th November 2006

care to explain what you wanna to tell from this photo? thanks

JaPhotos · 14th November 2006

hmm...if your subject is the old lady, than it will be better if she is not cut off on the left side.

but overall the impact is there.

(unless i totally get it wrong??)

Autumnite · 14th November 2006

i think its too heavy on the left...

jack_low · 14th November 2006

Originally Posted by JaPhotos

hmm...if your subject is the old lady, than it will be better if she is not cut off on the left side.

but overall the impact is there. (unless i totally get it wrong??)

i agree on it shouldn't be cut off on the left side, framing seems tight. it maybe your style.
overall nice! is this the roof of vivocity?

matrixneo · 14th November 2006

my view....for me...I will name this MEMORY...and will not cut off the gals head...show the whole of the old lady in wheelchair ...but bo bian if not possible to remove the bag

stormweaver · 15th November 2006

hm.. ya its Vivo's roof skypark. Well i been there 3 times... well find that the place has quite some interesting ppl to take hehe. thanx for ur comments. Ya too tight.. coz i dun wan the maid in the image. shes holding on to the wheel chair.. the girls running too fast.. hehehe i kinda missed them on the right side of the image... hehee

stormweaver · 15th November 2006

Originally Posted by Jesmun18

care to explain what you wanna to tell from this photo? thanks

Well i wanna express the feeling of .... ageing.
well shes old now .. but she use to b young once... so its looking back at memorises bah. something lik that. hope the image tells the feeling.

stormweaver · 15th November 2006

Heres a new image.
Well i have the my album online but hm... i just go one by one ? or jus post link here .. n get critics here ?

This image of a boiboi, BAM he is cute.

not sure wad it expresses but hope to see more suggestions on how i can capture it.

jack_low · 15th November 2006

Originally Posted by stormweaver

Heres a new image.
Well i have the my album online but hm... i just go one by one ? or jus post link here .. n get critics here ?

This image of a boiboi, BAM he is cute. not sure wad it expresses but hope to see more suggestions on how i can capture it.

this photo shows as if a father taking pictures of his son so that next time can show it to him. haha...

eikin · 15th November 2006

Originally Posted by stormweaver

Hi i'll be posting my shots here for C & C. Willing to accept anything u guys comment on. No probs jus shoot me. Thanx i believe thats wad i need.

this picture is visually too heavy on the left side. the right side seems almost entirely redundant if not for the shoes below. i don't feel comfortable about the colour cast as well, doesn't seem to convey the mood fitting for the theme. try not to place your signature on important objects within the frame.

stormweaver · 15th November 2006

Originally Posted by eikin

this picture is visually too heavy on the left side. the right side seems almost entirely redundant if not for the shoes below. i don't feel comfortable about the colour cast as well, doesn't seem to convey the mood fitting for the theme. try not to place your signature on important objects within the frame.

hm ok hehe i agree.. the signature is indeed quite..... hehehe but i duno where to place it le. the angle of the signature seems only fitting onto the right bottom. thanx for the comments ..

stormweaver · 15th November 2006

i have the image of his father n him together.. hm.. but its not very nicely framed.. wasted. hehe well his dad was looking at me when i'm taking this small boy.. hhehehe phew he didnt say anything. hehe

Originally Posted by jack_low

this photo shows as if a father taking pictures of his son so that next time can show it to him. haha...

eikin · 15th November 2006

Originally Posted by stormweaver

hm ok hehe i agree.. the signature is indeed quite..... hehehe but i duno where to place it le. the angle of the signature seems only fitting onto the right bottom. thanx for the comments ..

consider changing the signature

it's best to keep it in a neutral colour (black or white) and translucent (30%-50% opacity) as well so as not to become attention grabbing.

eikin · 15th November 2006

here's a reminder as well, please keep to 1 picture/1 series a week. if you intend to post a series of picture, please take note that the pictures should be viewed in relation to each other (i.e. the entire series work as a single piece of work and should be read as such)

lixuelian · 16th November 2006

Hey, in my opinion only.. I thought your 1st pic looked a bit like those anti-theft, "beware of your belongings" type of poster, with the bag fully exposed and owner being a wheel-chaired old lady.

stormweaver · 17th November 2006

Originally Posted by lixuelian

Hey, in my opinion only.. I thought your 1st pic looked a bit like those anti-theft, "beware of your belongings" type of poster, with the bag fully exposed and owner being a wheel-chaired old lady.

haha ar.. this is rather interesting comment. hehhe got got .. when u mention it .. got feel hehe . thanx dude

cheers

14th November 2006	#1
stormweaver Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: cck Posts: 129	My shots Hi i'll be posting my shots here for C & C. Willing to accept anything u guys comment on. No probs jus shoot me. Thanx i believe thats wad i need.

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Jesmun18 Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 414	Re: My shots care to explain what you wanna to tell from this photo? thanks

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JaPhotos Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 197	Re: My shots hmm...if your subject is the old lady, than it will be better if she is not cut off on the left side. but overall the impact is there. (unless i totally get it wrong??)

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matrixneo Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Hougang Posts: 390	Re: My shots my view....for me...I will name this MEMORY...and will not cut off the gals head...show the whole of the old lady in wheelchair ...but bo bian if not possible to remove the bag

15th November 2006	#7
stormweaver Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: cck Posts: 129	Re: My shots hm.. ya its Vivo's roof skypark. Well i been there 3 times... well find that the place has quite some interesting ppl to take hehe. thanx for ur comments. Ya too tight.. coz i dun wan the maid in the image. shes holding on to the wheel chair.. the girls running too fast.. hehehe i kinda missed them on the right side of the image... hehee

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stormweaver Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: cck Posts: 129	Re: My shots Heres a new image. Well i have the my album online but hm... i just go one by one ? or jus post link here .. n get critics here ? This image of a boiboi, BAM he is cute. not sure wad it expresses but hope to see more suggestions on how i can capture it.

15th November 2006	#15
eikin Moderator Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: 東京 Tokyo Posts: 10,920	Re: My shots here's a reminder as well, please keep to 1 picture/1 series a week. if you intend to post a series of picture, please take note that the pictures should be viewed in relation to each other (i.e. the entire series work as a single piece of work and should be read as such) __________________ APAD

16th November 2006	#16
lixuelian New Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 11	Re: My shots Hey, in my opinion only.. I thought your 1st pic looked a bit like those anti-theft, "beware of your belongings" type of poster, with the bag fully exposed and owner being a wheel-chaired old lady.