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    Hi i'll be posting my shots here for C & C. Willing to accept anything u guys comment on. No probs jus shoot me. Thanx i believe thats wad i need.


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    care to explain what you wanna to tell from this photo? thanks

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    hmm...if your subject is the old lady, than it will be better if she is not cut off on the left side.

    but overall the impact is there. (unless i totally get it wrong??)

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    i think its too heavy on the left...

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    Quote Originally Posted by JaPhotos View Post
    hmm...if your subject is the old lady, than it will be better if she is not cut off on the left side.

    but overall the impact is there. (unless i totally get it wrong??)
    i agree on it shouldn't be cut off on the left side, framing seems tight. it maybe your style.
    overall nice! is this the roof of vivocity?

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    my view....for me...I will name this MEMORY...and will not cut off the gals head...show the whole of the old lady in wheelchair ...but bo bian if not possible to remove the bag

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    hm.. ya its Vivo's roof skypark. Well i been there 3 times... well find that the place has quite some interesting ppl to take hehe. thanx for ur comments. Ya too tight.. coz i dun wan the maid in the image. shes holding on to the wheel chair.. the girls running too fast.. hehehe i kinda missed them on the right side of the image... hehee

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jesmun18 View Post
    care to explain what you wanna to tell from this photo? thanks
    Well i wanna express the feeling of .... ageing.
    well shes old now .. but she use to b young once... so its looking back at memorises bah. something lik that. hope the image tells the feeling.

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    Heres a new image.
    Well i have the my album online but hm... i just go one by one ? or jus post link here .. n get critics here ?

    This image of a boiboi, BAM he is cute. not sure wad it expresses but hope to see more suggestions on how i can capture it.


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    Quote Originally Posted by stormweaver View Post
    Heres a new image.
    Well i have the my album online but hm... i just go one by one ? or jus post link here .. n get critics here ?

    This image of a boiboi, BAM he is cute. not sure wad it expresses but hope to see more suggestions on how i can capture it.

    this photo shows as if a father taking pictures of his son so that next time can show it to him. haha...

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    Quote Originally Posted by stormweaver View Post
    Hi i'll be posting my shots here for C & C. Willing to accept anything u guys comment on. No probs jus shoot me. Thanx i believe thats wad i need.

    this picture is visually too heavy on the left side. the right side seems almost entirely redundant if not for the shoes below. i don't feel comfortable about the colour cast as well, doesn't seem to convey the mood fitting for the theme. try not to place your signature on important objects within the frame.

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    Quote Originally Posted by eikin View Post
    this picture is visually too heavy on the left side. the right side seems almost entirely redundant if not for the shoes below. i don't feel comfortable about the colour cast as well, doesn't seem to convey the mood fitting for the theme. try not to place your signature on important objects within the frame.
    hm ok hehe i agree.. the signature is indeed quite..... hehehe but i duno where to place it le. the angle of the signature seems only fitting onto the right bottom. thanx for the comments ..

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    i have the image of his father n him together.. hm.. but its not very nicely framed.. wasted. hehe well his dad was looking at me when i'm taking this small boy.. hhehehe phew he didnt say anything. hehe

    Quote Originally Posted by jack_low View Post
    this photo shows as if a father taking pictures of his son so that next time can show it to him. haha...

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    Quote Originally Posted by stormweaver View Post
    hm ok hehe i agree.. the signature is indeed quite..... hehehe but i duno where to place it le. the angle of the signature seems only fitting onto the right bottom. thanx for the comments ..
    consider changing the signature it's best to keep it in a neutral colour (black or white) and translucent (30%-50% opacity) as well so as not to become attention grabbing.

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    here's a reminder as well, please keep to 1 picture/1 series a week. if you intend to post a series of picture, please take note that the pictures should be viewed in relation to each other (i.e. the entire series work as a single piece of work and should be read as such)

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    Hey, in my opinion only.. I thought your 1st pic looked a bit like those anti-theft, "beware of your belongings" type of poster, with the bag fully exposed and owner being a wheel-chaired old lady.

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    Quote Originally Posted by lixuelian View Post
    Hey, in my opinion only.. I thought your 1st pic looked a bit like those anti-theft, "beware of your belongings" type of poster, with the bag fully exposed and owner being a wheel-chaired old lady.

    haha ar.. this is rather interesting comment. hehhe got got .. when u mention it .. got feel hehe . thanx dude

    cheers

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