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13th November 2006
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 642
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What do you think?
took this picture of my colleague after one of our lunch breaks in office
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13th November 2006
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Join Date: Jun 2003
Posts: 303
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Re: What do you think?
I think the lighting is great. BUt i prefer not si tighly cropped esp on upper portion.
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13th November 2006
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 167
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Re: What do you think?
very nice. Studio like.
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13th November 2006
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Senior Member
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Clementi, Singapore
Posts: 2,837
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Re: What do you think?
Whats up with the eyes? Looks like shes squinting.
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13th November 2006
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Senior Member
Join Date: Oct 2004
Posts: 4,409
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Re: What do you think?
First look, I like the picture. Given the assumption that the location is not a studio, the lighting acheived is very good.
However 2 things started to creep up. The first is, surprisingly, the lighting. The lighting on her body, her arms and legs are all done, but then her face, just a bit too flat. The pose is what's really bugs me. Too complicated. There are jsut way too many lines working here. Also too contrived. All said and odne, still a good job given the limitations. |
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14th November 2006
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 414
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Re: What do you think?
nice. I like this photo...
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14th November 2006
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Join Date: May 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 464
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Re: What do you think?
it's a nice shot and it looks very natural.
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