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Have been into amateur photography for about 2 years, decided to post some of my photos into here for comments.
Hope to pick up more knowledge and skills in photography, and most important, to earn my own DSLR! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Last edited by eikin; 15th November 2006 at 08:30 PM. Reason: images' URL replaced with UBBCode |
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![]() like this shot.....wat cam u using?? ![]()
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I believe its an Ixus 500.
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Thanks for your comments and replies.
Ya, it's an IXUS 500 I'm using. How do you know that?? |
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pic 1
picture is divided into 3 areas (bridge, skyline and empty sky) with none being able to hold viewer's attention due to the lack of a subject of focus. also, for usual night city skyine shots, can consider photographing before the sky darkens completely to capture some colours/details in the sky to add interest pic 2 image is soft. horizon is slanted unnecessary. colours and contrast need some improvement as they seem dull now. pic 3 very soft. framing is awkward. the scene looks incomplete (not wide enough to tell the environment, not close enough to examine the details) pic 4 very soft. a wider frame would be more interesting. i am guessing that the softness in the pictures is due to unstable support for long shutter takes. and reminder, please post 1 picture/1 series a week to allow for more indepth critiques from viewers. if series is intended, the pictures should be related (i.e. the series work as a single piece of work and should be viewed as such) ![]()
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APAD Last edited by eikin; 15th November 2006 at 08:55 PM. |
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I noticed you used f/2.8 for photo one.. I think a smaller aperture (larger fstop) with longer exposure (you used 1 second for this one).. Would be nicer! =)
At least the lampposts would be more attractive - giving you that starburst effect. Composition wise, it's superb in my book though. =) |
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Download the photo, then right click the file, properties and then under summary click advance.
Can see lots of stuffs there such as focal length, aperture, shutter speed, etc. #1 is nice. Me like it lots ![]() #2 is a little underexp. There's a significant canting (as you can see from the horizon.) #3 doesn't say much imho. #4 gives a little dark and misty feeling. Lower portion is underexp (btw, how to solve that?) |
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Hi eikin,
Thanks for your c&c and rules about the forum! Very informative and i believe it will help me a lot in my future shootings. ![]() Thanks to all others for your c&c! |
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Hi Ovc17m,
I believe your picture quality is being limited by your equipment. However, just some things you can do. 1) Does your cam have APERTURE PRIORITY? (meaning, Av mode) Shoot @ smaller aperture such as F5.6 or F8 for more Depth of Field else your pictures will look too soft. Recently shoot some sunsets with F8, works well~ 2) Use tripod. If you have a tripod, use it to reduce handshake since you'll be shooting at low shutter speed. If don't have, please don't buy. Save $$ for your DSLR. I believe digicams have their limits, this is one of them ![]() |
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