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Old 11th November 2006   #1
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Default Night Shoots of Singapore

Have been into amateur photography for about 2 years, decided to post some of my photos into here for comments.

Hope to pick up more knowledge and skills in photography, and most important, to earn my own DSLR!











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Old 11th November 2006   #2
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like this shot.....wat cam u using??
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Old 12th November 2006   #3
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I believe its an Ixus 500.
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Old 12th November 2006   #4
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Originally Posted by PointBlue View Post
I believe its an Ixus 500.
Yup just ck with opanda....thks!
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Old 12th November 2006   #5
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Thanks for your comments and replies. Ya, it's an IXUS 500 I'm using. How do you know that??
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Originally Posted by ovc17m View Post
Thanks for your comments and replies. Ya, it's an IXUS 500 I'm using. How do you know that??
Use software chk....
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Old 15th November 2006   #7
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Default Re: Night Shoots of Singapore

pic 1

picture is divided into 3 areas (bridge, skyline and empty sky) with none being able to hold viewer's attention due to the lack of a subject of focus.

also, for usual night city skyine shots, can consider photographing before the sky darkens completely to capture some colours/details in the sky to add interest


pic 2

image is soft. horizon is slanted unnecessary. colours and contrast need some improvement as they seem dull now.

pic 3

very soft. framing is awkward. the scene looks incomplete (not wide enough to tell the environment, not close enough to examine the details)

pic 4

very soft. a wider frame would be more interesting.


i am guessing that the softness in the pictures is due to unstable support for long shutter takes.

and reminder, please post 1 picture/1 series a week to allow for more indepth critiques from viewers. if series is intended, the pictures should be related (i.e. the series work as a single piece of work and should be viewed as such)
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Old 15th November 2006   #8
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Default Re: Night Shoots of Singapore

I noticed you used f/2.8 for photo one.. I think a smaller aperture (larger fstop) with longer exposure (you used 1 second for this one).. Would be nicer! =)

At least the lampposts would be more attractive - giving you that starburst effect.

Composition wise, it's superb in my book though. =)
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Old 16th November 2006   #9
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Default Re: Night Shoots of Singapore

Download the photo, then right click the file, properties and then under summary click advance.
Can see lots of stuffs there such as focal length, aperture, shutter speed, etc.

#1 is nice. Me like it lots
#2 is a little underexp. There's a significant canting (as you can see from the horizon.)
#3 doesn't say much imho.
#4 gives a little dark and misty feeling. Lower portion is underexp (btw, how to solve that?)
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Old 18th November 2006   #10
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Hi eikin,

Thanks for your c&c and rules about the forum! Very informative and i believe it will help me a lot in my future shootings.

Thanks to all others for your c&c!
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Use software chk....
what software is it?
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what software is it?
Opanda?
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Old 20th November 2006   #13
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Hi Ovc17m,
I believe your picture quality is being limited by your equipment.
However, just some things you can do.

1) Does your cam have APERTURE PRIORITY? (meaning, Av mode)
Shoot @ smaller aperture such as F5.6 or F8 for more Depth of Field else your pictures will look too soft. Recently shoot some sunsets with F8, works well~

2) Use tripod.
If you have a tripod, use it to reduce handshake since you'll be shooting at low shutter speed.
If don't have, please don't buy. Save $$ for your DSLR.
I believe digicams have their limits, this is one of them
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