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Old 10th November 2006   #1
revelatio83
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Hi,

Had my Alpha DSLR for a couple of months. Wanna improve my photography in anyway i can. Comments would be greatly appreciated.

Cheers,
Nicholas



Taken from Sony DSLR A100, 1/800s, 22.0mm, f/13, ISO:200.

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Old 10th November 2006   #2
bladehamster
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I tink the shot would be better if u move closer to the subject ( Raffles Statue ) and also frame the shot such that the palm tree is behind raffles ). Even better if you can capture the nice skies together.

A little brighter would be better too

Juz my 2 cents
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Old 10th November 2006   #3
elfvin
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the statue is slanted and yeah a little brighter. i think the wb is a bit off too.. a little more contrast?

ah! sorry me also newbie. dont know say correct anot but continue shooting!!!
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