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9th November 2006
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Location: Singapore/Malaysia
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Re: By George I've done it
I find the mood brought abt by the colour very appealing
The kids eyes is very attention grabbing very sharp i would say thus drawing my attention to the kid but i do find the mans and the kids hand a bit distracting a tighter crop on the kid to make the viewer wonder why she is sulking/unhappy/angry would be my preference.. thats my humble opinion regards
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Re: By George I've done it
If the man had worn a darker colour shirt, then the viewer would not be distracted by the white patch on the left. Overall, a nice photo.
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10th November 2006
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Re: By George I've done it
Great comments - thanks guys.
The shirt is overblown & I don't have the PS skills yet to amend it's distraction. I also find the out of focus hands a hinderance to my enjoyment of the piccie. As for that petulant look - I think it was her way of telling me to take the camera out of her face! Keep the feed back coming! |
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