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    Default By George I've done it


    My first successful attempt at posting a piccie in clubsnap!
    Constructive comments most welcome

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    Default Re: By George I've done it

    I find the mood brought abt by the colour very appealing
    The kids eyes is very attention grabbing very sharp i would say thus drawing my attention to the kid
    but i do find the mans and the kids hand a bit distracting a tighter crop on the kid to make the viewer wonder why she is sulking/unhappy/angry would be my preference..

    thats my humble opinion

    regards

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    Default Re: By George I've done it

    If the man had worn a darker colour shirt, then the viewer would not be distracted by the white patch on the left. Overall, a nice photo.
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    Default Re: By George I've done it

    Quote Originally Posted by Pynch View Post
    If the man had worn a darker colour shirt, then the viewer would not be distracted by the white patch on the left. Overall, a nice photo.
    Nice mood but was the white shirt intentional

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    Default Re: By George I've done it

    Great comments - thanks guys.

    The shirt is overblown & I don't have the PS skills yet to amend it's distraction.

    I also find the out of focus hands a hinderance to my enjoyment of the piccie.

    As for that petulant look - I think it was her way of telling me to take the camera out of her face!

    Keep the feed back coming!

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