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    Default A gare of shine...





    Two simple shots taken recently. C&C is much appreciated.

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    Opps... sorry for the typo. Title is Glare of Shine.

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    Second shot would be great if the lantern didnt melt into the shadows that much

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    love the second picture.

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    haha... Thanks dude... Your comment are much appreciated.

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    For #1 pic,
    The cropped lighted-spot located at the bottom right and the full lighted-spot on the right spoils it.

    For #2 pic,
    I like it, but maybe you want to make the latern more prominent?

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    i like the ambient for both.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jeremyspk View Post
    For #1 pic,
    The cropped lighted-spot located at the bottom right and the full lighted-spot on the right spoils it.
    I don't get what you mean actually. Framing problem?

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    Quote Originally Posted by danlin View Post
    i like the ambient for both.
    Haha.. Thanks dude.. I like it too.. Well especially the second picture. still able to see a lizard.

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    Quote Originally Posted by KennethLin View Post
    I don't get what you mean actually. Framing problem?
    Sorry bout that, maybe I didn't explain properly.

    I just thought that the laterns are the subjects and leaving the left side of the picture empty would be cooler than having an unknown weak light source (the bright spot on the right) and a partially-cropped light source that cause distractions. just my 2cents
    Last edited by jeremyspk; 12th November 2006 at 02:22 PM.

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    Oh... Got it.. I do appreciate everybody's comment for my pic as I could improve on it.

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