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    Default Eggs Ver 2



    Some exiff data for reference;_

    Camera: Nikon D70s
    Exposure: 0.5 sec (1/2)
    Aperture: f/22
    Focal Length: 22 mm
    Exposure Bias: 1/2 EV


    I tried this composition in order to fill up the picture frame and to have a triangle shape image. I should have diffused the shadows of the 2 eggs more. Next time lah...

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    Default Re: Eggs Ver 2

    IMO....perhaps a couple of chicks (real or fake) might enhance the effect?

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    Default Re: Eggs Ver 2

    Quote Originally Posted by matrixneo View Post
    IMO....perhaps a couple of chicks (real or fake) might enhance the effect?
    The basket (with eggs) give me the slanting feeling of this photo. Also the composition fail to impress your viewer... overall i only can give this photo 3.5/10

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    Default Re: Eggs Ver 2

    image is sharp at least and that is a very good start.
    but i find the subject and composition extraordinarily ordinary.
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    Default Re: Eggs Ver 2

    maybe u shld lose the baskets..they dont add anything to the composition

    remember, less is more

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    Default Re: Eggs Ver 2

    Guys,

    Thx for the C&C.. will improve the weaknesses!

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