hmmm... this flower is yummy!

carrot^ · 22nd January 2003

it does looks like it is biting the flower

SzennyBoy · 22nd January 2003

Good try but I think you should have included more of the flowers and also not crop off the butterfly's leg on the bottom.

Falcon · 28th January 2003

I would prefer the space to be on the left rather than the right.

megaweb · 28th January 2003

here is my comments

- leaf is distracting in the background
- background is dark .. prefer a bit brighter
- the wings are not in focus .. due to shallow DOF
- compose more space to the butterfly on the left

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SzennyBoy Member Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: London, UK Posts: 694	Good try but I think you should have included more of the flowers and also not crop off the butterfly's leg on the bottom.

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Falcon Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 2,870	I would prefer the space to be on the left rather than the right.