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21st January 2003
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Unplugged
Simple telephone
used side lighting from the window at about 6pm  |
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22nd January 2003
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Does my name need to be Megaweb or Falcon before someone starts putting down some comments? Gd or bad just put! I for one think that the powercord should be get rid of |
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22nd January 2003
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Hello FLiNcHY
Sometimes, it is not so easy to comment on shots like this cos difficult to say how to improve esp for a person that has no experience.(like me) Since u asked for comments, here it goes. The theme of this shot is unplugged. However, it does not show much of it being unplugged. More like a closeup shot of a telephone. Focus is also slightly soft. Try to locate a place in the photo that you want complete sharpness so you can draw the viewers' eyes to that place. My 0.02 cents worth. |
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22nd January 2003
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the photo does nothing for me ie the subject doesn't look interesting. Its not like u got fantastic lighting there to enhance the telephone. So there. My honest opinion. |
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22nd January 2003
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I would like to comment, but apparently this is not the critique's corner.
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22nd January 2003
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22nd January 2003
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Anyway i think if u wan comments mayb better if u tell us
1. why did u chose to take this 2. wat r u trying to tell us with this pic 3. Reason of chosing the subject 4. wat does the pic tells u |
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22nd January 2003
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* togu runs away |
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22nd January 2003
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 /me think better change my cam liao |
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22nd January 2003
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no comments....
hhaha... just kidding... yes, please lose the powercord cos its kind of distracting.
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22nd January 2003
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 now now where is dagger?? |
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22nd January 2003
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Thanks!!
 I like critiques helps me learn |
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22nd January 2003
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Last edited by Falcon; 22nd January 2003 at 10:08 PM. |
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22nd January 2003
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I did
But i got much better comments there than here http://www3.photosig.com/viewphoto.php?id=642060 |
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 Congrats |
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