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    Default Eggs, but one is outside!



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    Default Re: Eggs, but one is outside!

    Doesnt work for me

    Could be the shadows, could be the colours, the position of the egg outside the basket is dodgy, sorry, just doesnt work for me.

    Edit: The cloth aswel, doesnt go well in my opinion.
    Last edited by wildstallion; 5th October 2006 at 10:20 PM.

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    Default Re: Eggs, but one is outside!

    I think the shadows are too harsh. Doesn't work for me either.

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    Default Re: Eggs, but one is outside!

    will only comment on the lighting..

    soft or hard lighting are depend what setting or mood you want to create.
    but what bother me is that you have two light source, may I know which one is the kay light?
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    Default Re: Eggs, but one is outside!

    The flash is a tad too harsh, and the shadows are all over the place. You might want to diffuse the strobe, and use fill in... the egg outside looked a little more like an orange.

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    Default Re: Eggs, but one is outside!

    wildstallion, cbma, catchlights and microcosm thx alot for your comments and suggestions.

    The problems:
    1) Shadows too harsh
    2) Outside egg wasn't properly positioned
    3) The cloth also did make it. Actually its the whole piece of black cloth.
    4) Lighting also. My main lighting was from the top.

    All points taken and I'll do the necessary corrections.

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