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Join Date: Jul 2005
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The diagonal lines and sharp edges create a visually-strong image. I buy your idea of simplicity. However, that dot at the top is surprisingly distracting, you might wanna consider stamping it out?
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Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: TMC
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Wow, this is a real split - perfectly into 2.
My feelings about it - a bit monotonous both in color and composition. It's too regular. I suppose that is the situation at the time but it would be better if the side of the building is contrasted against a blue sky with clouds drifting 'into' the building. But I like your idea of the clear lines narrowing down up the building. Cheers. Keep posting man! ![]() |
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Join Date: May 2004
Location: Changi
Posts: 4,372
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I actually like the bird(it's a bird btw, not a dot, can't see at this size so I don't blame you) because it sort of unbalances the image a bit. Did consider stamping it out but I think I'll leave it there.
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Beyond the outer limits
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Great photo!
I feel it will be better to increase the contrast or adjust the levels? Btw where is this? Bouna Vista area?
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Join Date: Oct 2006
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it's a cliche went horribly wrong.
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Join Date: May 2004
Location: Changi
Posts: 4,372
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You've got a vendetta huh? For everyone's info, here's the original thread which I gather pissed him off.
http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=229542
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