after the rain...

shawntim · 20th January 2003

Comments, critiques, flames more than welcome. All taken with a +4 and flash. =)

shawntim · 20th January 2003

Peek-a-boo!

denizenx · 20th January 2003

wah ur red very red... see liao eye pain... desat a bit?

denizenx · 20th January 2003

other than that, the first 2 pics are very chio...

shawntim · 20th January 2003

Quote:

Originally posted by denizenx
wah ur red very red... see liao eye pain... desat a bit?

then something must be very wrong with your monitor, because the flowers are that red and that pretty.

Didn't do any form of saturation at all.

shaann · 20th January 2003

Quote:

Originally posted by shawntim

then something must be very wrong with your monitor

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piertiong · 20th January 2003

nice and clear pictures!!!

chngpe01 · 20th January 2003

The pics are nice and well taken, esp the first two.

IMHO the 1st can be better if the petals from another flower in background (just behind the subject) is not there, kind of distracting and vying for attention.

Similarly for the 2nd pic, in this case the flower bud.

the 3rd pic, I personally would give it a miss as it is abit withered and the background is quite cluttered.

The pic "peek a boo" is creative and would turn out even better if it is crop abit tighter ie esp both sides. If possible the subject be sharper and better lit. (though it may not be possible)

Whatever the case these are still good shots, the comments are purely my personal opinion and maybe subjective.

Cheers

shawntim · 20th January 2003

Thanks chngpe01,

Your comments are very helpful.

20th January 2003	#1
shawntim Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 472	after the rain... Comments, critiques, flames more than welcome. All taken with a +4 and flash. =)

20th January 2003	#3
denizenx Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: L2TPYSG Posts: 4,514	wah ur red very red... see liao eye pain... desat a bit? __________________ "I'm... dreaming... of a wide... angle~ Just like the ones I used to know~"

20th January 2003	#4
denizenx Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: L2TPYSG Posts: 4,514	other than that, the first 2 pics are very chio... __________________ "I'm... dreaming... of a wide... angle~ Just like the ones I used to know~"

20th January 2003	#7
piertiong New Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 25	nice and clear pictures!!!

20th January 2003	#8
chngpe01 Moderator Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 7,460	The pics are nice and well taken, esp the first two. IMHO the 1st can be better if the petals from another flower in background (just behind the subject) is not there, kind of distracting and vying for attention. Similarly for the 2nd pic, in this case the flower bud. the 3rd pic, I personally would give it a miss as it is abit withered and the background is quite cluttered. The pic "peek a boo" is creative and would turn out even better if it is crop abit tighter ie esp both sides. If possible the subject be sharper and better lit. (though it may not be possible) Whatever the case these are still good shots, the comments are purely my personal opinion and maybe subjective. Cheers