1st October 2006, 12:45 AM
1st October 2006, 09:53 AM
in this frame, the focus can be shifted to the flower on the forefront. as of this picture, the frontmost flower is a distracting out of focus mass of yellow taking up a prominent position. i find the exposure distractingly over as well.
1st October 2006, 10:51 PM
2nd October 2006, 12:41 PM
Auntie.. i think wat eikin said is pretty relevant, of putting the foreground in focus.
However, I think maybe you can try a different perspective?
I'm not sure how the situation was exactly, here's my 2cents.
Since the flower is generally of the same shape(star shape), how would putting a foreground flower with centre at a corner, show some petals, defocus the foreground, focus thru the petals on another flower. better still if they reveal another flower thru the petals.
macam like playing with pattern...
2nd October 2006, 08:32 PM
3rd October 2006, 01:13 PM
i agree with eikin
also to add the bg is too busy as well
try a different viewpoint
12th October 2006, 09:11 PM