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    pardon e file size =)

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    Second photo looks good... might wanna choose a background with less objects inside. Hahah.

    Like the way the background is dark while the flowers are seen. Or maybe you should show the whole of the flower at the corner, but make if out of focus like this.

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    er? lost

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    Quote Originally Posted by hub_bo
    er? lost
    you making me lost too..... hmmm.... which part u dont get it?

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    I duno isit the size of the 1st pic, I feel that the lamp is slanted to the left....and I would like the lamp post not to center in the pic.....may be to the side or lower down to see more sky. Basically the rule of third will be good. Nice sky though, if sky is the obj. If you 1 2 show the lamp post, it is abit underexpose, the detail on the lamp is lost....so are u trying to show the lamp or the sky?

    I like the right flower with the dark background, good contrast. If can just shoot the right flower in portrait will be nice.

    Nonetheless, you have improved very very much.

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    Quote Originally Posted by lastboltnut
    I duno isit the size of the 1st pic, I feel that the lamp is slanted to the left....and I would like the lamp post not to center in the pic.....may be to the side or lower down to see more sky. Basically the rule of third will be good. Nice sky though, if sky is the obj. If you 1 2 show the lamp post, it is abit underexpose, the detail on the lamp is lost....so are u trying to show the lamp or the sky?

    I like the right flower with the dark background, good contrast. If can just shoot the right flower in portrait will be nice.

    Nonetheless, you have improved very very much.
    show the sky =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by redstone
    Second photo looks good... might wanna choose a background with less objects inside. Hahah.

    Like the way the background is dark while the flowers are seen. Or maybe you should show the whole of the flower at the corner, but make if out of focus like this.
    yep e bold part..

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    Quote Originally Posted by hub_bo
    yep e bold part..
    Oh haha paiseh.

    If you show more of the flower in the lower left corner, it will be better.

    I like the way the background is dark while the flowers are bright.

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    orh orh !! i get it lol.. hmmm y e bg dark ah... i tink i use flash
    lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by hub_bo
    orh orh !! i get it lol.. hmmm y e bg dark ah... i tink i use flash
    lol
    Yup... hahah I could never get it right. Either my background would be lit too or flower overexposed. Hahah.

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    Lamppost shot looks very hazey to me.

    Second shot is technically good, but for some reason, the composition just doesn't shout anything to me, no idea there if you get what I mean.

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    Been learnng the ropes? You've improved a lot!

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    O, then the exposure looks fine to mee...

    Quote Originally Posted by hub_bo
    show the sky =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by redstone
    Yup... hahah I could never get it right. Either my background would be lit too or flower overexposed. Hahah.
    i tink i was lucky i guessed thanks for the compliment =)

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    Quote Originally Posted by night86mare
    Lamppost shot looks very hazey to me.

    Second shot is technically good, but for some reason, the composition just doesn't shout anything to me, no idea there if you get what I mean.

    haha i noe wad u mean. I os dun get any feel ops lol but thanks for e comment =)

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