Are you thirsty?

davidsim · 18th September 2006

comments for improvement please... thanks.

Robbo73 · 18th September 2006

I like the idea but the angle doesn't do it for me I'm afraid - perhaps a little too near the horizontal (I find myself tipping my head to the left !).

I like the colours/postprocessing and the shape of the glass in the background. If the composition was nearer upright with both glasses as the key focus in the frame (i.e. without the leaflet holder) it may be more pleasing? DoF is just nice for me and I like the way the first glass fills the frame.

Just goes to show how you can make something out of nothing with a good eye - nice one.

All my own personal preference of course - feel free to ignore !

davidsim · 18th September 2006

Just to add... it was taken using my sony ericsson K800i camera phone... no Photoshop post processing.. just used in-phone software for some effect... blew me away when i download onto laptop to view... like it alot

JOHN LEE · 18th September 2006

K800i

That is cool!

Robbo73 · 19th September 2006

Originally Posted by davidsim

Just to add... it was taken using my sony ericsson K800i camera phone... no Photoshop post processing.. just used in-phone software for some effect... blew me away when i download onto laptop to view... like it alot

A CAMERA PHONE???!

I'm impressed...a lot.

davidsim · 19th September 2006

rotated the pic... how u like it now?

JediForce4ever · 19th September 2006

I like the composition...but I find it a little tight...

18th September 2006	#1
davidsim Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: East Posts: 603	Are you thirsty? comments for improvement please... thanks. __________________ Flickr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/dabiddosan/ Last edited by davidsim; 3rd October 2006 at 09:41 PM.

18th September 2006	#2
Robbo73 Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Bukit Timah Posts: 214	Re: Are you thirsty? I like the idea but the angle doesn't do it for me I'm afraid - perhaps a little too near the horizontal (I find myself tipping my head to the left !). I like the colours/postprocessing and the shape of the glass in the background. If the composition was nearer upright with both glasses as the key focus in the frame (i.e. without the leaflet holder) it may be more pleasing? DoF is just nice for me and I like the way the first glass fills the frame. Just goes to show how you can make something out of nothing with a good eye - nice one. All my own personal preference of course - feel free to ignore ! __________________ Robbo Last edited by Robbo73; 18th September 2006 at 10:30 PM.

18th September 2006	#3
davidsim Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: East Posts: 603	Re: Are you thirsty? Just to add... it was taken using my sony ericsson K800i camera phone... no Photoshop post processing.. just used in-phone software for some effect... blew me away when i download onto laptop to view... like it alot __________________ Flickr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/dabiddosan/ Last edited by davidsim; 18th September 2006 at 10:33 PM.

18th September 2006	#4
JOHN LEE Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Singapore Posts: 127	Re: Are you thirsty? K800i That is cool!

19th September 2006	#6
davidsim Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: East Posts: 603	Re: Are you thirsty? rotated the pic... how u like it now? __________________ Flickr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/dabiddosan/

19th September 2006	#7
JediForce4ever Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Singapore, CanonGraphers.org Posts: 3,163	Re: Are you thirsty? I like the composition...but I find it a little tight...