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Old 17th September 2006   #1
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Exif data for above photo:-

JPEG (8-bit) Normal
Lens: 18-70mm F/3.5-4.5 G
Focal Length: 31mm
Exposure Mode: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-Pattern
2 sec - F/10
Exposure Comp.: +5.0 EV
Sensitivity: ISO 200
White Balance: Auto
AF Mode: AF-S

C&C is certainly welcome. Can knock me down real hard.. no problem one.

Thx.

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Old 17th September 2006   #2
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looks a lil under on my monitor..
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Old 17th September 2006   #3
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Originally Posted by mnoor


Exif data for above photo:-

JPEG (8-bit) Normal
Lens: 18-70mm F/3.5-4.5 G
Focal Length: 31mm
Exposure Mode: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-Pattern
2 sec - F/10
Exposure Comp.: +5.0 EV
Sensitivity: ISO 200
White Balance: Auto
AF Mode: AF-S

C&C is certainly welcome. Can knock me down real hard.. no problem one.

Thx.
seem to have over saturation, the red is too striking, and lost in details.

there seem to be 1 bright white spot there... wonder if its your CCD problem,

composition can work on abit, cos there is 1 empty space on the right.

otherwise, not bad.
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Old 17th September 2006   #4
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Not bad mnoor! What kind of lighting and set up of the various onions and chillies did u use?

My nitpick, if i may:

1. Colors too saturated
2. Details lost in shadows
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Old 18th September 2006   #5
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Originally Posted by mnoor


Exif data for above photo:-

JPEG (8-bit) Normal
Lens: 18-70mm F/3.5-4.5 G
Focal Length: 31mm
Exposure Mode: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-Pattern
2 sec - F/10
Exposure Comp.: +5.0 EV
Sensitivity: ISO 200
White Balance: Auto
AF Mode: AF-S

C&C is certainly welcome. Can knock me down real hard.. no problem one.

Thx.
I think it adds more interesting if you have one of tomato or onion in half. thanks
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Old 18th September 2006   #6
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JediForce4ever, KopiLaiSheng, Del_CtrlnoAlt, David

Thx alot for all ur C&C. I really appreciate them cos I gather more knowledge from them.

I will take note of all the setbacks and improve on them on my next assignment

Oh yeah David, abt the lighting... I used my false ceiling lights he he!

Once again, thank you all!

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Old 6th October 2006   #7
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I reckon it's best to C & C this photo in print. Monitors are treacherous
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Old 6th October 2006   #8
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looks slightly too red on my screen.
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Old 6th October 2006   #9
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I think it is over saturated plus lack of details.
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