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    Default Cloudy Sunset

    Photo was taken at Tioman. I find the pic is a bit messy, what do you think?
    What do i need to improve on? Thank you for viewing.


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    Default Re: Cloudy Sunset

    Frame the horizon lower (one-third from bottom) and eliminate the messy foreground.
    Move to the left more, broaden the space between the boat and the big rock, and capture less of the rock instead.
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    Default Re: Cloudy Sunset

    The rock and the boat are currently competing elements, pick one or reduce the prominence of one. Also, there's a tad too much foreground(or too much sky, again, pick one).
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    Default Re: Cloudy Sunset

    I find that it is a bit soft/blur....no tripod?

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    Default Re: Cloudy Sunset

    keelboat and the sun alone would be better.

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