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    C&C welcome. Please let me me your constructive comments.


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    I kinda like it.. but the left side of the pic is to empty to balance out.. mayb have a title to balance out ?

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    Thanks V.V i was kinda experimenting with negative space on this. Maybe a lil more detail on the corridor might have been better after taking a relook at it.

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    Nice feel to "corridor".

    Any reason you left lots of space on the left? Maybe fill it a poem or message... juz a suggestion.

    thanks for sharing
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    Quote Originally Posted by eng_keow
    Nice feel to "corridor".

    Any reason you left lots of space on the left? Maybe fill it a poem or message... juz a suggestion.

    thanks for sharing
    Negative space in this context was meant to actually lead the eyes to only the focus point which is the corridor. Technically it should be showing more in terms of the essence of the venue. like more details besides just the bicycle to convey the mood of the place. But i guess i failed terribly at doing that.

    By fitting in a message or poem at the left on the negative space voids the negative space and takes away the effect of it. Unless you are artistically creating a photo to fit a particular reason.

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