I have a dream...

vendeta · 4th September 2006

I was shooting in the RSAF and saw this kid looking at the paratroopers, please give comments and suggestions to improve my skills, i'm just a newbie cheers!

Slivester · 4th September 2006

I suppose what your audience might want is the dramatic element that will sustain attention. The picture framing seemed rather quintal, so does the title, rather archetypical. The colour balance is kind of off, so you might want to improve on this field.

vendeta · 4th September 2006

thanks for the comments! cheers!

4th September 2006	#1
vendeta Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 251	I have a dream... I was shooting in the RSAF and saw this kid looking at the paratroopers, please give comments and suggestions to improve my skills, i'm just a newbie cheers!

4th September 2006	#2
Slivester Deregistered Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Woodlands Posts: 1,030	Re: I have a dream... I suppose what your audience might want is the dramatic element that will sustain attention. The picture framing seemed rather quintal, so does the title, rather archetypical. The colour balance is kind of off, so you might want to improve on this field.

4th September 2006	#3
vendeta Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 251	Re: I have a dream... thanks for the comments! cheers!