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Old 31st August 2006   #1
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A night photo taken from my college, critics welcome
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Old 31st August 2006   #2
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Like the effect, save the bottom part, what time was it? =D

And what ISO did you use?
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Old 1st September 2006   #3
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Originally Posted by night86mare
Like the effect, save the bottom part, what time was it? =D

And what ISO did you use?
thanks. it was around 9.30pm in Mlebourne, ISO50 with canon G6
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Interesting, you used flash?
I suppose you did, correct me if I'm wrong hee.
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Originally Posted by night86mare
Interesting, you used flash?
I suppose you did, correct me if I'm wrong hee.
u r corrected
(I didn't use flash, what makes u think so?)
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Er, for a low ISO setting (low sensitivity to light) that's a lot of light?
Just guessing, plus the tree doesn't seem equally lighted~
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The highlights. The tree and the house make an interesting subject though. Consider a reshoot.
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Originally Posted by Stoned
The highlights. The tree and the house make an interesting subject though. Consider a reshoot.
yap, how do you reckon I can improve when reshooting
other then the aperature (last time was 2.2)?
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Skip the bottom part... and don't be afraid to tilt the camera.. you can try using the lines along the front wall..
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willyfoo is right. keep the interesting bit and trim off the excess.
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How's this. Was just playing around. Hope you like it



Let me know if you want it taken off.

p.s. Hmmm afer a second look, the building might be a little too dark. Oh well.
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Interesting,how does it looks in black and white?
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Default Re: a night photo

Originally Posted by bluroom
How's this. Was just playing around. Hope you like it



Let me know if you want it taken off.

p.s. Hmmm afer a second look, the building might be a little too dark. Oh well.
Erm, thats slightly over-done. The contrast on the light exposed portion is lesser than the brightness.
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Good one there...
Keep the photos coming...
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Actually I agree. Went a little overboard! Hahaha
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wait till that sb return me my tripod....then can go back and reshoot.
thanks guys...but the PSed version a bit over for me but it does give me some idea of how the reshooting can be
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I dun think so, it was a long exposure, look at the moving clouds.

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Interesting, you used flash?
I suppose you did, correct me if I'm wrong hee.
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Originally Posted by lastboltnut
I dun think so, it was a long exposure, look at the moving clouds.
Ah yes now that you mention it..

The main reasoning was the uneven exposure of light heh.
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