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Old 31st August 2006   #1
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I love this pic! Tell me what you feel about it


comments would be appreciated
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Old 31st August 2006   #2
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Ah, I don't know about this....

Sorry, this doesn't 'connect' with me.
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Old 31st August 2006   #3
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The car looks like it can't decide if it's peeking out or staring out.

If you get what I mean hehe. I guess it's an acquired taste on your part; for me, it doesn't appeal hrm.
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Old 31st August 2006   #4
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hate the title. love the geometry here.

dont know how to describe what I like abt the photo but i'd hang this on my wall.

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Old 31st August 2006   #5
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I like it, and the car seems to be peeking out.
However, it feels a bit 'not right' but I don't know why. Could it be the pipe at the right? Or the centric position of the car?
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Old 1st September 2006   #6
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I suppose I like the shadows and unrealistic feel of the "dull" walkway. I think it could be improved If I took a step right to take the photo Thanks btw for the comments.
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Old 1st September 2006   #7
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the tiles on the floor attracted me...........doesn't feel anything toward the photo, but nice and neat lighting you have.
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Old 1st September 2006   #8
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Yea, if you take a step right, the car would seem to be peeking out more! =D
Don't think it'd affect anything else much other than the feel of the car, personally.
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Old 1st September 2006   #9
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It works for me. Lines, shapes, depth and colors. The red box and yellow car makes this pic pop.
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Old 1st September 2006   #10
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there's form but there's no content
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I don't know why I like it, but I do. I like simple things. I do think you should crop out the drain pipe on the right though.
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The image made me feel like I was in the inside of my home looking out through my open front door. The Morris Minor just rang my doorbell. Kinda strange eh?
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