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Old 29th August 2006   #1
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Old 29th August 2006   #2
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Wah... cheeem ah...
Can tell us why you title the picture like that?
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Old 29th August 2006   #3
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eerrhmm...those who love cats should understnad this ...
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Old 29th August 2006   #4
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Orh...
Nextime maybe you can try to do abit of processing, pump up the colour/saturation abit...
sharpen abit... play with curves abit...

Also would be nice to see more pictures... forming a series kinda thing...
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Old 29th August 2006   #5
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yah hor...i also dunno why i cant take sharp picture like anyone else leh..is it not enough light ar? but this pic abit affected by compress artifacts lar...upload size limits...thanks!!!!
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Old 29th August 2006   #6
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is the bigger size one better? tink same lah hor...
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Old 29th August 2006   #7
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the one thing with this picture, the eye is not in focus. It's close, real close but not spot on.
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Old 29th August 2006   #8
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yah yre right, zooming in from the original pic shows that the eye is infested with noise, damn iso!
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I like the framing. I like the cat's reaction. And yes the sharpness is just so slightly off. But my main gripe is the box. Art direction can make or break a picture and I just feel sometimes photographers forget or do not take into consideration the overall art direction of a scene or frame. mise-en-scene.
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Old 3rd September 2006   #10
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Originally Posted by bluroom
I like the framing. I like the cat's reaction. And yes the sharpness is just so slightly off. But my main gripe is the box. Art direction can make or break a picture and I just feel sometimes photographers forget or do not take into consideration the overall art direction of a scene or frame. mise-en-scene.
no lah bro, me no trying to arty farty lah..me jus a point n shooter, it was an impromtu shot, its quite hard to frame a cat who cant stop moving and that damn box getting in the way...maybe if the boxs nikon or canon it would be better..haha..thanks!
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Old 4th September 2006   #11
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Hey man, no need to apologise. Point and shooter stuff can be really nice too. I feel that this IS a nice pic, great reaction and angle of the cat. My only gripe is the box, which is well...steeped in real life anyways. So I guess its ok.
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