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Old 28th August 2006   #1
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Old 28th August 2006   #2
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Old 28th August 2006   #3
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Colour looks a bit off on the second image or is it massive purple finging? Some shadow areas look purple.
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Old 28th August 2006   #4
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eh wats ur definition of photojournalism?
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Old 28th August 2006   #5
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your school sure serves some nice food!

They are all fine, except for the last one, which I feel could be improved with a more colourful selection of cake.
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Old 28th August 2006   #6
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wah! so many nice cakes, now you have made me hungry, die man, must go eat cakes liao.
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Old 28th August 2006   #7
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hmmm, seems like ur definition of photojournalism is different from mine...
but nice pics nevertheless.

the colour of the 2nd pic seems a bit off.
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Old 28th August 2006   #8
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I went to the wrong school.

We only had milk and chips

I would preferr a tad bit more DOF in 1 and 2 (but only a bit)

#3 my thoughts have gone obscure... I would like to see a waterfall in the background

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Old 30th August 2006   #9
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great shots! love the saturation of colors, makes all the food appetising.

I don't think i'd classify this as photojournalism. It is definitely a food feature but doesn't extend to the degree of journalism. I'd classify this as food photography.
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Old 30th August 2006   #10
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this is called food photography...

not food photojournalism.....

u didnt event write an article on it or something, hw can it be journalism ?
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Oops, wish I could change the title. Yeah agree, its food photography.

Anyway, to guys who commented on the construction and colours, thanks for your critique/suggestions!
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