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    This is so cool! Just like a real ad! Nice work...
    Eugene

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    hey thanks man!

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    lol ... I like your 'advertisement' approach to photos

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    Thats absolutely cute ! , making me have the sudden crave of kisses.
    Choco of course !

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    Quote Originally Posted by _fAITH
    Thats absolutely cute ! , making me have the sudden crave of kisses.
    Choco of course !
    thanks! yeah, sometimes it's even better than real thing

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    Jaredflo, nice touch. I love the idea. However, you may wish to improve the typographic treatment. It seems a little too large now. It should be subtle and not vie for attention with what is a nice image.

    There should be 1 hero and that's the shot, followed by the type, so perhaps a lighter weight and smaller point size would help.

    I'd also bring the text down to the bottom right and have it in 1 line instead of 2. It can be done when the text is smaller than it is now.

    Still really nice work.

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    thanks for the input G-man

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    I reckon it's fantastic, although I am a magazine editor so can I add one little niggle?

    It should be '...than the real thing.' You're missing a word there. Also I reckon the advice to shrink and move the type is a great idea. I love it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by thedellis
    I reckon it's fantastic, although I am a magazine editor so can I add one little niggle?

    It should be '...than the real thing.' You're missing a word there. Also I reckon the advice to shrink and move the type is a great idea. I love it.
    Yes, that's sounds better hehehe. thanks thedellis

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    Quote Originally Posted by thedellis View Post
    I reckon it's fantastic, although I am a magazine editor so can I add one little niggle?

    It should be '...than the real thing.' You're missing a word there. Also I reckon the advice to shrink and move the type is a great idea. I love it.
    yeah this is fantastic, too bad the guy has left...

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