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Old 25th August 2006   #1
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hmmm.... i dont know what title best describe this photo... when i take this one, gotta have a feeling above mother's love...
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Old 25th August 2006   #2
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no hard feelings. statues don't work for me. it'll be better if they are humans.
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Old 25th August 2006   #3
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I dont like the fact that you cropped the head or taht you have left the tree in the bottom left in the frame, crop it out or PS it away.

I like the effect where you have the baby in sunlight/blue sky, that really works for me!
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Old 25th August 2006   #4
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i agree with bro wildstallion about the cropped mother's head and the bottom left leaves. They are in your way of a good picture. =) But I guess you can shoot it again but not sure if you can get the highlights around the body as you have gotten it in this picture.

Also, I think a CPL might help to make the skies "bluer"? hehe. Then a nicer effect? Just my thoughts. And choose a nice day with cute clouds.

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Old 27th August 2006   #5
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Ok, now this is really a pushing it kind of question......

How patient are you ?

Would you have the time ?

Is it possible that the moon might pass over that direction ?

If the answers are, "most likely". That shot would be great taken at night with a full moon behind the baby.

Getting correct exposure would be a great challenge for you too.

OK, I know it is pushing it. Just a thought

Oh, a title .... "The Offering".


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Old 27th August 2006   #6
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How about 'Kunta Kinte'?

Agree with the rest, the head being chopped off & the distracting tree. The lack of clouds and the sky showing thru just around the baby is also nice.
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Old 27th August 2006   #7
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i didnt do any cropping... just resizing... i just try to take this angle without seeing it... as just pass by this statue...
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Old 28th August 2006   #8
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shld crop away the bottom leaves. kinda distracting.

title: i believe i can fly

haha kinda lame i know.
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