My perspectives of Macro (Part 3)

[perspectives-act]

Only manage to get these 2 insect shots. Will have to train my eyes to see the "Unseen"

01.


02.

[tchuanye]

Nice composition, and pleasing green BG.

But the spider is out of focus, and the eyes of the DF are soft, and the whites are blown.

[Sharpion]

ya, #1 spider out of focus, but still makes for an interesting shot coz of the nice compo - would be super if got an insect on the bottom right hor

#2 the green really nice! thinking maybe closer is better

ya i tink we serious lack of subjects that day

[tltan]

like the composition of #1.

2 comments:
(1) tchuanye has made his point clear about what can be improved and I concur. but add on that the second one composition is quite cliche with DF already.

(2) GOT DUST on your sensor. hahahaha. the bunny is on the right hand corner.

Anyway, I like your compositional sense. =p Sharpion....good sifu eh.

[Sharpion]

Originally Posted by tltan like the composition of #1. Anyway, I like your compositional sense. =p Sharpion....good sifu eh.

this one not i teach him one la, he is already v.good

[perspectives-act]

Originally Posted by tchuanye Nice composition, and pleasing green BG. But the spider is out of focus, and the eyes of the DF are soft, and the whites are blown.

Tks for comment, if only the spider is in focus this is one rally small creature. My eyes are so tired after a few shots. Plus the wind keep on blowing non-stop No excuse though, shoot more and Patience

[perspectives-act]

Originally Posted by Sharpion ya, #1 spider out of focus, but still makes for an interesting shot coz of the nice compo - would be super if got an insect on the bottom right hor

Good idea hor, next time must search for all these creatures to pose for us liao

[perspectives-act]

Originally Posted by Sharpion this one not i teach him one la, he is already v.good

Waliao, u r ever so humble. Praise me until so high up, like that I where got chance to learn more from u I only treated u an orange juice leh

[Outlook]

1st one is really different.
Notice the dark dot. Can crop out or touch up ....

[perspectives-act]

Originally Posted by Outlook 1st one is really different. Notice the dark dot. Can crop out or touch up ....

Tks for ur kind comments