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Old 22nd August 2006   #1
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Old 22nd August 2006   #2
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Nice pic, has the feeling of traffic jam at 5pm. But I like it with more contrast if possible.

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Old 22nd August 2006   #3
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i like the layers of space in the picture, there's some hint of a 'working male' motif which don't quite speak to me.
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I like how all the faces are somehow hidden. Give it the sense of economy and of this busy and mysterious world that we live in. Nice!
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Ha! It's true, all faces hidden....no need to Mozziac....

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I like how all the faces are somehow hidden. Give it the sense of economy and of this busy and mysterious world that we live in. Nice!
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Thanks alot for the discussion.

Now for some technical bits:

Well, this photograph is shot on film (Tri X) and processed carefully in Rodinal (Semi stand/ slow agitation) to give a good seperation on tones. This also results in edge effects (increased sharpness) along the edges.

As for printing, it was split grade between 0 and 5 with a cold light diffuser, and selenium toned to give more depth in the shadows.

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Taken around the corner of a city street while I was in a bus. Using DOF, I extended the range of focus and over expose by 2 stops to get some decent exposure on the driver. Frankly I was quite surprised to get more than just traceable shadow details.

Anyway, lens is 50mm prime fixed on a rangefinder, stopped down to a certain extent to reduce flare effects.
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