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Old 22nd August 2006   #1
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Hello, I am new to this forum and have been enjoying the active community. I caputured this picture at a local beach in California to pass up a silent, winter evening.

Comments welcomed.

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Thanks, Denniskee. I think I got it now.

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Old 22nd August 2006   #2
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cannnot see the photo.
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Old 22nd August 2006   #3
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Sorry... try the link:

http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/7...albeach2.0.jpg
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also cannnot

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Old 22nd August 2006   #5
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it's here

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Old 22nd August 2006   #6
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Pretty good, the shadows are mysterious.

However, there's a slight tilt to the image that's mildly uncomfortable. And IMO I feel that there's a lack of an interesting subject (e.g. the human touch) that can break up and add a visual interest/story to this image.
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Old 23rd August 2006   #7
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Thanks tqviet0327 and PointBlue. A good point and well taken about the slight tilt, I will consider the suggestion when I have a chance to reprint.

Interesting enough... I guess the print felt right to express how I felt at the time -- solitude, dark, unstable, and alone.
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Old 23rd August 2006   #8
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I like the feeling. Did you burnt the pic? How come no stars, and background can be so dark.....

Originally Posted by e46fik


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Nikon N80 Fuji Acros 100 B&W at f22/30s Scanned

Hello, I am new to this forum and have been enjoying the active community. I caputured this picture at a local beach in California to pass up a silent, winter evening.

Comments welcomed.

JP

Thanks, Denniskee. I think I got it now.
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Old 23rd August 2006   #9
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Thanks... no edits. It was an overcast, brisk night with dense fog near the shore (right side of the image)
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O, that explains it. Thanks!

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Thanks... no edits. It was an overcast, brisk night with dense fog near the shore (right side of the image)
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