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Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Singapore East
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Took this while on holiday in Hong Kong. Shot in a morning market
I find it interesting to capture natural light sources on subjects. You never know how the outcome will turn out - and more often than not, photos come out nice. I like this photo 'cos the pose and light coincided very nicely to give an impression that she is watering light and life to the fruits... ![]() Look forward to your comments ![]() Many thanks! |
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Singapore East
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Comments anyone? I'm a newbie. Hope to learn a thing or two from you.
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Location: Hong Kong, Pokfulam
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er.. the pic is too dark. it probably would be more appropriate that the girl to be the focus of the picture rather than the dark patch
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I hope you don't mind but I have tried to use your pic to do some ps to give that effect. It is not well done but that is my idea. ![]() |
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Location: Singapore East
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Hi Eng Keow - Excellent point and recommendation! Yes the focus on the spraying of light is enhanced by the crop. The "darkened" area was distracting. Thank you!
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Join Date: Apr 2004
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i think the picture is good as it is. the contrasting bright and dark spaces lend the action of watering the fruits some meaning. the wide angle give the entire activity a great context.
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Bukit Batok
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Hmm..that would defeat the purpose of capturing the natural light, no? I think the theme works with the photo.
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