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Old 11th July 2006   #1
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Default one man, one plane

Junk, Keep, Reshoot or Re-Title? C&C welcome...

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Old 12th July 2006   #2
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Hi,
There "thing" just above the wing is kind of distracting....
Is it the horizontal stabilizer?

Anyway, I like the jet engine (a little bit blur at the bottom) and the flap part...very nice..
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Old 12th July 2006   #3
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Default Re: one man, one plane

Originally Posted by SLee
Hi,
There "thing" just above the wing is kind of distracting....
Is it the horizontal stabilizer?

Anyway, I like the jet engine (a little bit blur at the bottom) and the flap part...very nice..
Yes, it is... Looks like it is a trent 800 engine...
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Old 12th July 2006   #4
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Default Re: one man, one plane

Composition didn't quite work for me. I might've just zoomed onto the engineer with a section of the wing overhead him. Lack of contrast between the wing structure, grass and tarmac makes for a flat uninteresting shot, imo.
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Old 13th July 2006   #5
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Default Re: one man, one plane

cool. thanks guys.

Would like to ask if improving the tones will make the photo more interesting or are the subjects are uninteresting?
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Old 13th July 2006   #6
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Originally Posted by Rev
cool. thanks guys.

Would like to ask if improving the tones will make the photo more interesting or are the subjects are uninteresting?
Yes, the tones might make the photo more interesting. Probably if you can take from anothe angle, it will have a whole new perspective.... eg, from the guy's back with him as the foreground...
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