Results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: The Back View

  1. #1
    Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2005
    Location
    HooKit Hwatok
    Posts
    192

    Default Freedom

    For ur C&C pls







    Note: Image have been processed to give this final look.
    Last edited by Itsbits; 10th July 2006 at 12:54 AM.

  2. #2
    Senior Member +evenstar's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Singapore / United Kingdom
    Posts
    5,655

    Default Re: The Back View

    what's with the wristband?
    eat. drink. shoot

  3. #3
    Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2005
    Location
    HooKit Hwatok
    Posts
    192

    Default Re: The Back View

    Quote Originally Posted by +evenstar
    what's with the wristband?
    It says "freedom"

  4. #4
    Senior Member +evenstar's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Singapore / United Kingdom
    Posts
    5,655

    Default Re: The Back View

    it's not obvious to the viewer, and a distraction rather (to me).

    also note the right shoulder where the skin is not smooth
    eat. drink. shoot

  5. #5
    Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2005
    Location
    HooKit Hwatok
    Posts
    192

    Default Re: The Back View

    Quote Originally Posted by +evenstar
    it's not obvious to the viewer, and a distraction rather (to me).

    also note the right shoulder where the skin is not smooth

    Cool..

    Yes, would agree with u. Should have PSed the fold on the right shoulder out. I failed to put across my interpretation of the picture. ( but if I have to say it out.. the picture prolly failed) The wristband is actually quite important.. no doubt its size. (I would have liked to have something bigger).

    Hows this for a change instead.

    Title: Freedom

    Description: Often we find ourselves wanting to be freed. But our actions do not say that, instead, we bind ourself even tighter, because we are afraid of what will happen to use when we are truly... free...

  6. #6

    Default Re: The Back View

    i wanted to say more but after so many comment and also lack of sleep i kinda run out of words ...

    so i pick a few words i felt and in simple form .. hoping it help ..

    CONTRAST -- LACK
    Layout - Not bad
    Wrist band - is really ok ..
    lighting -- Over .
    emotionally - Lack that Man feel ..

    The back of a MAN is support to carry the WORLD even if the Sky fall ..
    unless you just want to show a middle age man back like mine with a frontal beer belly ..
    your work lack that force or rather aura needed ..to carry it ..

    Over all i kinda like it if it just a another shot alot of photo look nice as long as it slightly compose and not badly out of focus or over-under expose ..

    but to diffrent yourself from a normal photo you got to have that Aura .. that bring for the attention .. badly needed by what we want to show ..

    Osix uvlux

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •