Take me on...

Nerd · 8th July 2006

I feel that the photo could have a tighter crop. The band of black followed by white pillar at the bottom of the picture feels distracting to me, like it's doing nothing for the picture. Also the lines leading from the bottom to the top seems to be slightly slanted. Would the situation permited to have you go in closer?

renewification · 8th July 2006

i tried to give it a tighter crop and straighten it before uploading this but it just lose a dynamic side of it..maybe is that anticipation thing. Thanks anyway=]

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Nerd Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Singapore - Jurong West Posts: 699	Re: Take me on... I feel that the photo could have a tighter crop. The band of black followed by white pillar at the bottom of the picture feels distracting to me, like it's doing nothing for the picture. Also the lines leading from the bottom to the top seems to be slightly slanted. Would the situation permited to have you go in closer? Last edited by Nerd; 8th July 2006 at 06:42 AM.

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renewification Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 544	Re: Take me on... i tried to give it a tighter crop and straighten it before uploading this but it just lose a dynamic side of it..maybe is that anticipation thing. Thanks anyway=]