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    Default Into the sunset

    Looking forward to some critique to improve my composition...


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    Default Re: Into the sunset

    i feel that the sun is too far to the right side

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    Default Re: Into the sunset

    Nice composition . If you able to change another angle where the sun is more towards to center potion, as you may wanna to give the sun set more attention.

    I agree with eikin, the sun is a little small.

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    Default Re: Into the sunset

    Tks for the comments

    Could have shot the sun bigger with a tele... but it would mean missing out on the entire jetty portion. Not the time of the year where we have a huge disk of a sun at sunset either.

    So that I won't get on the mod's nerves... Click here to see this instead

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