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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Dreamy Nikon Land
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Haha, my virgin work. Took 4 hours to edit.
http://www.photoatwork.com/flash/wedding01/ Please comment! Lots to learn! ![]() |
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: NEL
Posts: 897
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hmm..since im free now...pls accept my newbie comments
anw..i Like: 1) your ideas;eg , the two chairs whereby the couple are sitting and stuff.. 2) interesting composition Do Not Like: 1)your page setup..too " simple" prefered is pictures are in "frames" or something 2)slide transition.. Comment. use less flash, more "long shutter speed"...gives it a more dreamy feel..use "soft focus" filters too..more "chio".. ![]() |
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Posts: 2,330
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hey,
there is a picture of the couple kissing somewhere in the middle where you warp the picture i guess. That one not very flattering to the couple... Anyway, Maybe if you add frames to your pictures, they will look better. |
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Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: Singapore
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i think u'd get more response if you hotlinked the images here.
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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Was Trying to let it look 3D, Plus of course, hide some bad things. ![]() |
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Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Singapore
Posts: 8,492
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I think you not bad....Just judging from the photo you taken. Not layout...not very into coffeetable book.
Just a pointer, when shoot "money shot" like signing of the paper and stuff, just do a direct shot. Better to see what they sign and their face. |
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Join Date: Apr 2005
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Dreamy Nikon Land
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First time ROM shoot, before I get to the 'front' they signing already. Keke... ![]() |
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Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Singapore
Posts: 8,492
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You can ask them to hold for a shot, also, next time, anticipate whats going to happen next. |
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