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Old 21st June 2006   #1
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Default Three Steps, One Kowtow.

This young boy is probably 10 or 11 yrs old, one of youngest I’ve met.


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Old 21st June 2006   #2
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Brilliant !! I LOVE the first pic!! Simply Brilliant !!
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Old 21st June 2006   #3
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Agree No.1 is gorgeous! Good expressions and excellent framing
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Old 21st June 2006   #4
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i suggest the first one can be improved technically. Good composition. Good work.
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Old 21st June 2006   #5
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Originally Posted by photo.cavendish
i suggest the first one can be improved technically. Good composition. Good work.
Tx, any suggestions?
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Old 21st June 2006   #6
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Very nice, like the 1st picture the most, how the exposure like ? i noticed the color is very vibrant and places that should be under or over exposure very nicely done. e.g. the right side of the boy.
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Old 21st June 2006   #7
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Originally Posted by Ramius75
Very nice, like the 1st picture the most, how the exposure like ? i noticed the color is very vibrant and places that should be under or over exposure very nicely done. e.g. the right side of the boy.

Tx, IIRC, was shot at f/11 with my D70 + kit lens.
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Old 21st June 2006   #8
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Originally Posted by jeffhiew
Tx, IIRC, was shot at f/11 with my D70 + kit lens.
Wow, nice pictures taken I like the first one. Was it taken in Lhasa Tibet?
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Old 21st June 2006   #9
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Default Re: Three Steps, One Kowtow.

Originally Posted by KopiLaiSheng
Wow, nice pictures taken I like the first one. Was it taken in Lhasa Tibet?
Tx, yeap, was in Lhasa.
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Old 21st June 2006   #10
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Default Re: Three Steps, One Kowtow.

Originally Posted by jeffhiew
Tx, IIRC, was shot at f/11 with my D70 + kit lens.
wow, really nice, which part of the pic u metered at?? coz all seems so nicely exposured
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Old 21st June 2006   #11
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Originally Posted by Ramius75
wow, really nice, which part of the pic u metered at?? coz all seems so nicely exposured
Metered this arm, bcos wanted to capture the shadow in his face. Are u a D70 user too?

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Old 21st June 2006   #12
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Default Re: Three Steps, One Kowtow.

excellent angle for #1, the oversharpening is quite obvious though imo

i think you've got some good ideas for #2 but the execution don't quite bring them out, there's no intensity in the frame, just a normal frozen silhouette
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Old 21st June 2006   #13
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the first one is excellence.. nicely capture..
seem like everyone at the back is watching u to do the shoot...
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Old 22nd June 2006   #14
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Originally Posted by jeffhiew
Metered this arm, bcos wanted to capture the shadow in his face. Are u a D70 user too?
i see, thanks

nope, im a canon user
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Old 23rd June 2006   #15
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I like the use of dramatic sky to portray pic 1. Also, the use of light and shadows is very nicely done for pic 2.

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Old 23rd June 2006   #16
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Default Re: Three Steps, One Kowtow.

Originally Posted by tltan
I like the use of dramatic sky to portray pic 1. Also, the use of light and shadows is very nicely done for pic 2.

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tx Tltan
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Old 23rd June 2006   #17
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Default Re: Three Steps, One Kowtow.

i love the 1st pic. composition is great! colors are vibrant. it would be better if no one is looking at u tho, just my 2cents
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Old 24th June 2006   #18
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amazing.... this is great stuff!!!
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Old 24th June 2006   #19
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Some nice shots u got from this trip. Like your Yak shot as well.
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