Pride and Prejudice

danlin · 17th June 2006

is this posed or candid?

panzerpunk · 17th June 2006

Originally Posted by danlin

is this posed or candid?

Candid

PointBlue · 18th June 2006

I think you cropped too much of the legs. If you want to shoot a part of the leg, like the thigh, it is much better if you shot the whole leg so that the picture doesn't look disjointed. That, or don't include the leg at all.

In this case, you can try for a close-up and crop out the legs, but that will make the photo look less creative. You can try wider shots instead, that show more of the environment.

Bright sky is distracting, either leave it out or burn it.

These are the only constructive comments I can think of. To be frank, the subject isn't really that meaningful (no artistic intentions), but that's just me. Just my 0.02c

saltandlight · 18th June 2006

yeah not much subject here. black and white also doesnt suit this. but your images are getting more focused! (: yay

doug3fflux · 18th June 2006

so what is this picture trying to tell?

estronutz · 18th June 2006

hmm I feel that if you are trying to bring across the message, the words on the book should be clearer ... maybe a change of angle will help... I have to look hard before I can see the words ... IMHO

my 2 cents worth

17th June 2006	#1
panzerpunk Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 987	Pride and Prejudice

17th June 2006	#2
danlin Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 278	Re: Pride and Prejudice is this posed or candid?

18th June 2006	#4
PointBlue Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Pasir Ris Posts: 198	Re: Pride and Prejudice I think you cropped too much of the legs. If you want to shoot a part of the leg, like the thigh, it is much better if you shot the whole leg so that the picture doesn't look disjointed. That, or don't include the leg at all. In this case, you can try for a close-up and crop out the legs, but that will make the photo look less creative. You can try wider shots instead, that show more of the environment. Bright sky is distracting, either leave it out or burn it. These are the only constructive comments I can think of. To be frank, the subject isn't really that meaningful (no artistic intentions), but that's just me. Just my 0.02c

18th June 2006	#5
saltandlight Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 141	Re: Pride and Prejudice yeah not much subject here. black and white also doesnt suit this. but your images are getting more focused! (: yay

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doug3fflux Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: West of S'pore Posts: 925	Re: Pride and Prejudice so what is this picture trying to tell?

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estronutz Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: 星尬波 Posts: 373	Re: Pride and Prejudice hmm I feel that if you are trying to bring across the message, the words on the book should be clearer ... maybe a change of angle will help... I have to look hard before I can see the words ... IMHO my 2 cents worth __________________ My Gallery