Discontinuity

satay16 · 15th June 2006

Hi. My first photo post in clubsnap (second if you count double posting). Also my first try at abstract. Do give comments. Thanks

PointBlue · 15th June 2006

Looks too bland for me. Abstract doesn't cut it, if you can have fillflash and show more of this thing then may be better. Otherwise its not very interesting

foxtwo · 16th June 2006

more frayed than discontinued. what are your own thoughts on the picture as a whole?

it'll be more striking in portrait format with the wires running the entire length. shoot on a sunny day to capture tones on the wires as well as for a better background. there's no need to shoot for the sake of being there, when conditions aren't right just come back another time.

15th June 2006	#1
satay16 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 2,977	Discontinuity Hi. My first photo post in clubsnap (second if you count double posting). Also my first try at abstract. Do give comments. Thanks

15th June 2006	#2
PointBlue Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Pasir Ris Posts: 198	Re: Discontinuity Looks too bland for me. Abstract doesn't cut it, if you can have fillflash and show more of this thing then may be better. Otherwise its not very interesting

16th June 2006	#3
foxtwo Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: singapore Posts: 1,707	Re: Discontinuity more frayed than discontinued. what are your own thoughts on the picture as a whole? it'll be more striking in portrait format with the wires running the entire length. shoot on a sunny day to capture tones on the wires as well as for a better background. there's no need to shoot for the sake of being there, when conditions aren't right just come back another time.