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Old 14th June 2006   #1
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Picture:
Make: OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model: E-500
Shutter Speed: 1/320 second
F Number: F/5.6
Focal Length: 150 mm
ISO Speed: 100
PS : Adjust Image Levels

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Old 14th June 2006   #2
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Nice pic, very sharp..
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Old 14th June 2006   #3
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Exposure seems to be a bit over. Could have use some fill flash and increase the shutter speed.
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Old 14th June 2006   #4
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Yes, a very sharp picture. I like it!

However, you need to be really careful about the background. One of the more detracting things about backgrounds with spots of overexposed skies like that is that it is extremely distracting. Try to position yourself so that the background can be kept simpler. It is hard though, so more practice is necessary.
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Old 14th June 2006   #5
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Default Re: Bird

It's morning shot. right?
I thought I see morning sun....
There are better location to shoot these sunbirds in Chinese Garden.
Like what PointBlue said, pay attention to the back ground of your shots.
and watch where the sunlight coming from...
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Old 14th June 2006   #6
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Default Re: Bird

I think the image is a little soft, the light is kind of harsh, background and foreground are distracting and composition is too center. With shutter speed of 1/320, looks like you have good lighting condition even at ISO100. Usually for bird photography, you want to set your Aperture at f/8 and you can up ISO to 400. Like what others have said, pay attention to you surrounding before shooting.
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Old 15th June 2006   #7
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Default Re: Bird

great bird shot. but as mentioned the light is too contrasty. wonder if its due to your PS or naturally so.

If the latter PS can help: do some selective levels and also use the Shadow/Highlight adjustment. And also the reds of the coral tree needs some desaturation.
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Old 15th June 2006   #8
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Thanks guys, for your comments.
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Old 16th June 2006   #9
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Default Re: Bird

distracting foreground, and i don't believe capturing the subject's behind is interesting. lighting is ok but lose the left as it starts to overexpose.
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