my first sunset shot. need some comments pls.:)

yehosaphat · 13th June 2006

Nice shot... but always look out for things that can differentiate your take from others.

My 2 cents: Would have been better if you actually got the chance to capture the sun rays bursting out of the clouds. And if ever the sea was calmer, it would have gotten a nice reflection of the sun's rays

yuframes · 13th June 2006

i do not like the sea. too rough.
i like things soft. haha

i like the color of the sun rays!
overall good shot.

just my opinion though!

cheers~~!

grimicer · 13th June 2006

Too many clouds obstructing the view of the Sun

good attempt

PointBlue · 14th June 2006

Try to have a distinct subject in the picture, something that can define the foreground a little more. You could also try to compose it such that less of the foreground can be seen, since the sky's your main focus here.

Good try for a first attempt. Dramatic skies and clouds like this are really hard to come by.

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reinekz Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 82	my first sunset shot. need some comments pls.:)

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yehosaphat Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: North Posts: 2,605	Re: my first sunset shot. need some comments pls.:) Nice shot... but always look out for things that can differentiate your take from others. My 2 cents: Would have been better if you actually got the chance to capture the sun rays bursting out of the clouds. And if ever the sea was calmer, it would have gotten a nice reflection of the sun's rays

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yuframes Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 184	Re: my first sunset shot. need some comments pls.:) i do not like the sea. too rough. i like things soft. haha i like the color of the sun rays! overall good shot. just my opinion though! cheers~~!

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grimicer Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Eastern Singapore Posts: 528	Re: my first sunset shot. need some comments pls.:) Too many clouds obstructing the view of the Sun good attempt

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PointBlue Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Pasir Ris Posts: 198	Re: my first sunset shot. need some comments pls.:) Try to have a distinct subject in the picture, something that can define the foreground a little more. You could also try to compose it such that less of the foreground can be seen, since the sky's your main focus here. Good try for a first attempt. Dramatic skies and clouds like this are really hard to come by.