A Days Work

ronnie_sjr · 11th June 2006

The letterboxes at the right are quite distracting.. Maybe crop them away? Also, the composition needs a little work I feel. Maybe you wanna bring the focus to the workers more by going closer?

yuframes · 12th June 2006

thanks dude ! i will take note.

ronnie_sjr · 12th June 2006

Np =)

funkydonkey · 12th June 2006

When I saw the title i thought the photograph you were going to post took one full day to set up and shoot. LOL

yuframes · 12th June 2006

Originally Posted by funkydonkey

When I saw the title i thought the photograph you were going to post took one full day to set up and shoot. LOL

actually this is one of a series of photographs i took for this title. but i could not post every picture on this site because of the regulation of the critique corner. haha

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yuframes Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 184	A Days Work

11th June 2006	#2
ronnie_sjr Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: singapore Posts: 173	Re: A Days Work The letterboxes at the right are quite distracting.. Maybe crop them away? Also, the composition needs a little work I feel. Maybe you wanna bring the focus to the workers more by going closer?

12th June 2006	#3
yuframes Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 184	Re: A Days Work thanks dude ! i will take note.

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ronnie_sjr Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: singapore Posts: 173	Re: A Days Work Np =)

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funkydonkey Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 79	Re: A Days Work When I saw the title i thought the photograph you were going to post took one full day to set up and shoot. LOL